Foreword:
I originally wrote this story in the
Spring of 1994 for my ETS 403 Advanced Fiction Writing Workshop. It’s fiction based loosely on real people, time,
and locations. None of this happened to
me, though it could have. Nightmare on Elm Street came out months before the
story would have happened, so poetic license was taken on the details. It was written 27 years ago based on a time 7
years prior to that.
I’ve made some minor edits but left
it mostly intact, including a segment with racism. I left it in because that was the reality of
that time, both when it was written and of the time that it was about. It in no
way reflects my own feelings. It was a
different time.
The Death of Big Bird
Mom didn't want James and I sitting on the stoop at night. But, being thirteen there weren't many things to do on summer nights in Brooklyn. James was older so he'd go hang out with his friends on the avenue. Josepha, from across the street, kept me company.
Mom
had recently let me start shaving my legs. I showed them off by wearing shorts everyday;
if I couldn't find a pair of clean shorts I'd wear a skirt with Keds and bobby socks. I
was tanned only up to mid thigh. It didn't matter, I wasn't allowed to go to the beach if it
wasn't with mom, and she had to work weekdays and run errands on weekends.
Sundays
were for church.
Our
neighborhood, Park Slope-- The Slope, used to be all immigrants. Now it was the children
of the immigrants. In the building next to us was an Italian family, in the other lived
the O' Haras. Downstairs was a family of Mexicans that recently came to the States. Mom baby-sat for the lady's son.
I
sat on the stoop watching the little kids play while I waited for Josepha, she
was late.
Thirteen
had benefits. Mom recently let me start going to the movie theater in Sunset Park--two
miles and three subway
stops away. We took the subway over by ourselves. Mom
figured that in September I'd have to take the train to school anyway. I was going
to high school in Manhattan.
Three young girls were playing hop scotch on the sidewalk in font of me. They used a piece of broken
plate for chalk. Down the street, over the expressway, the sun was starting to set. It was
bright orange and heavy unlike the air, in summer it was always light and clear. Unbelievably
light and sweet for the city. It had to do with the trees. The few there were had
all their dark green leaves.
The
sun was almost gone, it gave the asphalt a funny dark gray color against all
the bright red and white cars that were parked in front of the buildings: Cadillacs, Dodges, Toyotas and
a few Monte Carlos. A few of the moms
start calling their kids in. It was a mess of names: Maria, Teresa, Jonathan,
Sarah, and a really pissed off mom with a slight accent, "David Sean
Miller, get your ass in here! NOW!" Repeated like a chorus of tiny voices,
"ah ma, just ten more minutes!"
I
looked at my watch then across the street. Where the hell is she? The bass in the stereo from a car still over
a block and a half away bounced off every glass. I wondered how bad it must've
been sitting inside the car. The quickest way to deafness. It was a hip-hop
song that was playing every ten minutes on the radio.
The
guys in the car drove by slowly thinking they were cool. Those were the worst
kind of guys. They said stupid shit to me. I just turned my head away and
ignored them. I bet they thought I was sixteen or seventeen.
Mike was across the street and crossed over. He lived in the same building as Josepha. My heart went to
my throat. He was walking my way. "Yo, what's up?" he said. In
Brooklyn people don't answer. They kinda just nod their head like I did. "Josepha's
gonna be here in a while. She got cawght up in some stuff. She invited us too.
She said it was cool wit yous." I nodded. Mike had bright green eyes,
light brown curly hair, rosy cheeks and the cutest Brooklyn accent. It was cool
with us but it wouldn't be cool with mom.
I
looked up to our third story window to make sure she wasn't looking out like
she sometimes did. I saw the shadow of her body and the ironing board. Good,
she was busy. Mike went to elementary
school with me. We were in the same "gifted" program from K- sixth
grade. Then we were put in the same Junior High classes. I hated him then. He
tortured me with the Indian rope burn, called me cry baby and other names. His favorites were
the characters from Sesame Street, he called Josepha Ernie. Then in eighth, I
don't know, he got cute and...friendly.
Josepha
showed up after Mike's friends Richard and Greg. They were talking about the WWF
last Saturday afternoon and were boring the hell out of me. They still believed
professional wrestling was real! But I couldn't say anything to diss them. It wasn't
even a year since I stopped playing with my Barbie dolls.
Josepha
looked pissed. Her lips were two thin, pink lines. She had a huge zit in the
middle of her forehead. "Yo, Unicorn!" Mike said to her. He laughed
his squeaky laugh and curled up to get ready for Josepha's punch that
definitely came. It landed in the middle of his back in a hollow boom.
Mike
said stuff that made us angry; it's what the rest of us wanted to say but
didn't have the balls to. She glared at
him. She didn't give people a warning. If we said something to her we watched
our backs. If not we'd wake up ten minutes later wondering what happened.
“Let's go. We're gonna be late cause a yous. I don't wanna miss the
movie." Josepha's accent wasn't as bad, she still pronounced th like a d:
dis, dat and dere. It wasn't our fault. Everyone talked like that, even our
teachers. Josepha's accent clicked on and off to impress the guys.
We
went up the block in our small group. My side of the street was mostly
brownstones. When we got near the avenue there were three garages. Oil spots
were on the sidewalk form the cars they fixed out side when it was too hot to
be indoors. I avoided stepping on them, even the dry ones. Some of the older
kids played handball against the garage walls at night when they closed.
James
was playing with Carmine and two girls.
“Where you going?" he asked.
"To
the movies. Ma knows." I didn't like him talking to me like that when I
was with my friends. He did it to show off in front of the guys. He tossed the
bright blue ball to Mike's sister, Amparo, she smiled at me and winked. She was
the only one of the older girls that talked to me, the others acted like we were invisible.
James
was always saying that Amparo had beautiful eyes and a great ass. I looked at
her and then at him. He did a funny shift with his eyes, like saying, keep your
smart-ass mouth shut. They stopped playing to let us pass. Once clear, I heard Amparo say, "three
up! Our serve!" Then the plop-clip of the ball as it hit the brick wall
and the floor.
We
went around the corner and down the stairs to the subway. The air from outside didn't penetrate the
subways. The tunnels had a strong metallic smell. It reminded me of trips to
Coney Island during the summer and visiting dad in The Bronx on weekends. In
summer the smell was stronger and seemed to stick to our clothes like bad
cigerettes.
Josepha
and Mike went to buy tokens. I waited for them with Richy and Greg by the
turnstile. Mom had given me two tokens. She bought ten packs of them once a
week for her ride to work. She handed one of them to me, held the other up and
said, “remember, even if you lose your money, one of these will always take you
home." Then she placed it in my hand.
"You
got money for the movie, right?" She had asked before I left, I told her I did from
the money that dad gave me. He gave James and I fifty dollars a month spending
money. James saved most of his for expensive sneakers. I used most of mine for
video games, candy and movies. When we were in school it didn't go as fast as
during summer. Doing nothing can use up a lot of money.
I
placed my token in the thin slot and crossed the turnstile. I looked down the
tunnel in the direction from where the train was supposed to come. Josepha tapped my
shoulder. "Hey, Big Bird, is it coming?"
“Nuh-uh," I
said.
Big
Bird was the pet name I got in fifth grade. I don't know who started it, Mike most
likely, but it caught on. Only my closest friends called me Big Bird any one
else who did got clobbered. I know why it came about. I was tall and lanky
looking, like a funny lizard standing on it's rear feet. At that awkward age my
nose was fully grown though I wasn't. Mom had this thing for dressing me in
yellow. I was glad that it was Big Bird and not banana or something.
While
we waited we talked about which movie we were going to see. The theater in
Sunset Park was always a few weeks behind the rest so we weren't too
enthusiastic about seeing something
great. The idea was to go somewhere outside of the Slope. “Why don't we just
fuck it and go to Manhattan?” Mike asked.
“Yeah,
right. We'll get back by mid-night," Josepha said.
"No
we won't. Look it's what... seven? We take the F train to Manhattan, that takes
fifteen minutes, watch a movie around seven-thirty, we'll be back by ten--easy."
Mike made it seem so simple.
"That's
if the trains run back to back, if we don't miss 'em and they aren't late,"
Josepha was hard to convince. She had something to say for everything. I sort
of wanted to go to Manhattan. It would be an adventure. But if Josepha wasn't
going then I wouldn't go either... couldn't go.
“They
run well at this hour. It's a weekday, come on! Are you a pussy? You're going
to high school in a month. You're stupid or something. We'll keep it in the
down low. Come on, it'll be dope!"
"I
don't know." She was almost convinced. "Manhattan at night is pretty
dangerous."
“There'll
be hundreds of people out on the street." Mike smiled. He had perfectly
straight teeth, his braces had been off a few weeks before. She said okay and
looked at me, I nodded.
"Done
then!"
We
got into Manhattan before eight, just like Mike said we would. I'd never been
to Manhattan without mom or dad. We got off on forty second street and walked
up to Broadway. I breathed in the excitement from the air. Tourists crowded the
streets and small shops filled with souvenirs.
Josepha
and I browsed in one while the guys bought the newspaper in a news stand across the
street. There was a section of dirty postcards. One of them had a bunch of nude butts and
on the bottom in a neon pink script it said, "I Love New York". The Chinese man
behind the counter stared at us then said in one breathe, "hey, you. You
no buy,
you go! This no library. This no store for hanging ow." He had a
few pens on the counter in a clear container with one dollar scrawled on it in black
marker. I had more than enough money in my pocket for the movie. I took a red pen that had
the New York sky line on it. I handed him two dollars. He rang it up and put the
change on the counter so I could pick it myself.
"Chink,"
Josepha mumbled in the same way she always did when she was ready for a fight. We
left the store and crossed the street and joined the guys, they were looking through the
newspaper in front of the stand. "Well?"
"There's
a few choices," Rich said. "We can go see The Fly, Friday the Thirteenth, A
Nightmare on Elm Street, or Back to the Future." We looked around us to see which theater
was the closest and which was showing one of the movies. A Nightmare was playing in
almost every theater in sight. We crossed Broadway to the nearest theater. The
movie started at eight and ran an hour and a half. If everything went how it
was supposed to go we'd be in Park Slope by ten-thirty.
Josepha
bought the tickets. Five bucks seemed like so much to go see a movie. That was the only
thing that sucked about being thirteen, we couldn't get things for half price anymore. We
sat near the back of the theater. Josepha sat near the aisle by Greg. I sat between Rich and
Mike. The movie didn't start until eight-fifteen because of the
commercials and previews.
Mike
entertained himself by scaring me through the movie: The guy walked down the hall in
Freddie's run down, nightmare house of horrors. With every open door I sat closer to the
edge of my seat. The music got tense. Freddie was going to appear any moment. My nerves
were tight springs ready to let loose, once Mike knew I was at that point-- by
my expression -- he suddenly grabbed my shoulders. I screamed and angry faces turned our
way. I slapped Mike on the arm. "Stop!" But he did it in every part
of the
movie, every ten minutes the theater echoed with one of my squeals.
We got up as soon as the screen faded to black. I hit the little green light button on my digital watch. It was five of ten! "Guys it's ten o'clock. We'll never make it in time. My mom'll be shittin' bricks!"
Josepha pushed through the
crowd and made room for us. Adults looked at us angrily. A lady told Josepha, "get
some manners!"
“Fuck
off!" Josepha pushed by her and we followed. Mike and I laughed. The lady looked startled.
We
jogged to forty-second street. "There's no way we're gonna make it before our parents start getting suspicious,"
I said. We ran down the stairs, avoiding a bum who was sleeping on the steps.
“Let's
call ‘em and say there's problems with the train." Mike's idea sounded
good.
We
each took a quarter and went to the public phones in the upper level of the train station. There were six phones
next to each other. An older man was using one and of course, mine didn't work. I waited impatiently until Josepha got off hers and called
mom.
"Where
are you?" she asked. I told her we were calling from the phones in the pizzeria a couple
of blocks up from the theater and that there
was construction in the subway and the trains were running delayed. "Okay, do you know how long you’ll be?" I said I didn't know but that
I'd be home before eleven. "I'm so glad you called. You are showing a
lot of responsibility. You're more responsible than James... anyway I'll let you go. Take
care of yourself and if there any more problems with the train call me! God bless you,
honey."
"See
ya in a while." I hung up. The others were already done with their calls.
We
hurried down to the third level and took our train home. If we wouldn't have called we would
have been in deep shit. We didn't reach Brooklyn until ten-thirty.
Josepha
and I sat on one side of the car and the guys sat facing us. There were a couple more
people in our car. They sat in the other end minding their business like typical New
Yorkers. The air conditioner helped dry the sweat that had build up on my back from the jog
to the subway and lying to mom. Talking in the train was like trying to talk with music
blaring. We had to get really close to the person and yell over the squeaking and
cracking of the wheels .
The
F train went above ground for three stops in Brooklyn. I got up and looked out the window by one of the doors. I realized someone stood next to me looking out. It was Mike.
"So you're going to Comm. Arts next year?" I said yeah. "So am
I." I knew that. "Maybe we can start hangin' out more. You know, being
that we're going to be in the same school." I mentioned that we could take the
train together in the morning.
"Yeah,
that's cool. I don't know anyone else who's going to Comm. Art from our school. Maybe we'll be in homeroom together."
“Or
some classes." I smiled. I looked out the window to downtown Brooklyn. From up here
Brooklyn looked flat. The highest building was the four faced clock with it's bright green
dials in the older part
of Brooklyn. It was ten-forty.
I
unfocused from the city and focused on his reflection on the glass. He was doing the same
thing.
The
train stopped and in a muffled voice the conductor announced, "Forth-Avenue.
Smith-Ninth street. Change here for the R going uptown Brooklyn, and downtown Brooklyn
and Manhattan." Our stop. We got off. We could have gone downstairs and
taken the R train one stop to where we lived, but we decided to walk the eight blocks
which was quicker.
The
guys walked ahead of Josepha and I. "What's up with you and Mike?" I knew she was
going to bring it up. "You guys were together a lot today."
"I
don't know. We're going to the same high school together. It's nothing, you act stupid about it.
So what's up with you and Richy?" I said. She hated Richy.
“Fuck
you, bitch!" she punched but not as hard as she did with Mike. She hugged me and
said, "Big Bird's got a boyfriend!"
“I
don't want anyone calling me Big Bird anymore,” I said.
“Why
not? You never cared
before. What's up with it now?"
"We’re going to
high school now. I'm gonna be fourteen in September. Call me Liz or Lissy. No
more Big Bird."
“Big
Bird's cool!"
The
guys were standing in the corner waiting for us. "Liz, Ernie, hurry
up!" Mike yelled. We walked quickly to them and crossed the street to our
block before the light changed.
James
was still playing handball with his friends. They stopped playing while we passed. "How
was the movie, Lissy?" James asked. I told him what movie it was and said it was okay.
"A bit late for you to be getting back from Sunset Park?"
"Ma
knows," I said.
Once
we passed, Carmine threw the ball against the wall. Amparo received it. She had tied her
blouse in a knot under her breast to show off her tight, tanned stomach. She looked at me
and smiled, "hey Lissy, did Mike tell you?", Mike turned red and crossed the street. Rich,
Greg and Josepha followed him. Josepha gave me a little wave good-bye.
"Hey,
Mike you're really pussy aren't you?" Amparo yelled over at him without
missing her swing at the ball. It bounced against the top half of the wall and James
slammed it back again. “I heard your going to Comm. Arts in September. I'll be a
senior, I can show you around. You wanna play ball? James can show you." Ker-plop, her
hand slammed against the ball. She pushed a wisp of hair away from her face.
"Right, James?"
James looked at her and
nodded. Sweat dripped down his forehead and into his thick brows. He was paying more
attention to the game because of Carmine's brutal returns. "Come on,sis,"
She said nicely. I wondered what strange bug bit her.
"It's
late. I have to go home."
"Another
time, then. How 'bout tomorrow. We're going to Coney Island. We're meeting at the
train station on ninth at ten. Can you come?" Ker-plop.
James
wasn't into our conversation. He was still trying to field off Carmine's passes.
"James'll be there.
Your
mom'll let you come. See you tomorrow, then?" I said yes and jogged home.
I
rang the doorbell. Mom came down the stairs in her bathrobe and let me in. I followed her up
to our apartment. "I'm glad you called or I would've been worried. Is your brother out
there?"
"Yeah,"
I sat
on the couch and took my shoes off and watched the news. The TV was a nineteen inch black
and white. Mom refused to buy another as long as it was working. The
picture flicked every two minutes, the newsman sounded hollow and far away but we had
to deal with it. I wiggled my toes. "Mom, can I go with Amparo to Coney Island
tomorrow?" It was better to ask her when she was ticked at James.
"Who's
Amparo?"
“She's
the older sister of a friend of mine. She's sixteen. She knows James."
"Who
else is going?" She sat at the table. She was drinking her nightly cup of coffee with milk.
“James,
and a few other of his friends. Probably my friend too." I hoped he would. Amparo
never mentioned anything about Mike.
She
sipped and nodded. "You showed you're responsible. More responsible than that brother of
yours. Maybe some of your that'll rub off on him." She took
another sip, "and if I
hear him protest that he doesn't want you going along tell
him I ordered you to. Besides, it was a friend of your's that invited you. He has
no business telling you no." She drank the last of her coffee
and went to the kitchen to rinse off the cup. I listened as she turned off the faucet
and the cup clinked in the dish drainer.
She
came back into the living room and kissed my forehead. "Goodnight,"
she said
and went to her room. I watched Johnny Carson while waiting for James to come
in.
He
entered a minute before mid-night, his curfew. He sat next to me and took off
his sneakers.
The vinegar stink filled the room.
"I
know you guys went somewhere else," he said. I tried to look like I didn't know what he was
talking about. "You look guilty. Besides Elm Street isn't playing in Sunset. I was
there for a matinee
yesterday. I don't care. Don't worry I'm not gonna rat on
you.”
I
was surprised. The reason for his existence was to get me in deep shit with
mom. "I did the same thing when I was thirteen. We gotta be up by eight to get to
the station on time. Gonna get ready for bed."
After he showered, we watched the end of Carson and Letterman. After fighting sleep for half an hour he finally gave in during the stupid dog tricks. I was wide awake when he went to his room. I watched Friday night videos and feel asleep on the couch during the late movie, something about some small Japanese islands and Godzilla.
I couldn't wait
until the morning.